托福寫(xiě)作雖然對(duì)作文篇幅字?jǐn)?shù)有一定要求，但如果只是單純灌水湊夠字?jǐn)?shù)，文章的質(zhì)量勢(shì)必會(huì)受到影響，得分當(dāng)然也不容樂(lè)觀。想要避免作文水分太多，考生需要學(xué)會(huì)避免使用空洞的單詞和詞組。下面就來(lái)說(shuō)說(shuō)在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中如何避免這樣的問(wèn)題吧。

1. 缺乏信息內(nèi)容的單詞詞組請(qǐng)刪除

一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來(lái)任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 空洞繁瑣表達(dá)可替換

有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

通過(guò)以上方式消除托福作文中的注水內(nèi)容，用更有價(jià)值和干貨的內(nèi)容填充文章，這樣的托福作文才能拿到較為理想的分?jǐn)?shù)。英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候大家都要注意類似的問(wèn)題，如果你還想繼續(xù)提升自己的水平的話，也可以來(lái)網(wǎng)校繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)。

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